ext_103113 ([identity profile] simsim-hb.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] what_we_dream 2011-03-29 02:17 am (UTC)

Na, it wasn't abrupt, but was unexpected and I hardly doubt you're unable to write romance (please do).
Although I have to say that I had to reread the end of chapter 4 and the beginning of chapter 5 cause it felt like the mood shifted from panic to seriousness somewhat suddenly...or maybe I was the one panicked, lol

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