he comes to know whether it’s enough or not it's all he will have I think this might be better as "he comes to know (understand?) [that][-/,]whether or not it's enough[-/,] it's all he will have"
It's eighteen months and three weeks to the day [/that-->from when?] he left LA
and although the self-assurance remains[,] the careless
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Date: 2011-05-22 11:56 pm (UTC)It's eighteen months and three weeks to the day [/that-->from when?] he left LA
and although the self-assurance remains[,] the careless
nearly continuous driving with [a] mild workout
Also, ;~; about mine. QQ, my friend, qq.
a[nd] frankly a bit of a crackpot
turns[,] and re-enters the flat
These were all awesome, btw! ♥